Fragile.
Just like the sunflowers by the side of the wall, she is fragile. Yet, sometimes, people turn a blind eye to the resilience within delicate beings. A seedling sprouting from the side of the wall, blossoming into beautiful sunflowers. How delightful.
Maybe that is a good thing though. No one would suspect the poor mistreated wife. Once she is at her brother’s place, she will wash the knife clean of blood and hide it among his kitchenware. No one would know.
Smiling to herself, she plucks a few sunflowers. They would brighten up her house, not that it is really necessary now that her adulterous husband is gone forever.
Written in response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers #50
Ooh, quite tantalizing.
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thank you for reading and glad you liked it(:
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What a great story.
Yet, sometimes, people turn a blind eye to the resilience within delicate beings. ” is a sentence that resonates very strongly.
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thank you Graham(: that is my favourite sentence in here too
hope you’re having a great week x
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Nothing like some fresh sunflowers to cover up a body 😉
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that’s an awesome idea! 😛
hope you’re having a great week!
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Wonderful story! I feel her “relief” after ridding herself of her adulteress husband! LOL! Maybe she has finally found peace. 😀 Love your spin on the prompt.
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thank you for organising this lovely challenge! she’s definitely relieved about there 😛 hopefully she’ll find peace with those gorgeous sunflowers. hope you’re having a good week x
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I’m having a good week and I hope you are too! Thank you so much! Your story is wonderful!
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I hope that nobody ever suspects 🙂
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she can always claim her husband ran off with some woman 😛
thank you for reading and hope you’re having a good week x
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A nice turnaround tale.
“Hope things go well now that she has the house to herself and can bring in sunflowers!,” she said.
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thank you(: i hope so too!
hope you’re having a great week~
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I like how you told a dark story so brightly – fab job 🙂
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thank you sonya(: glad you liked it
hope you’re having a good week xx
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Oh wow brilliantly done.
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thank you! glad you liked it and hope you’re having a good week xx
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I am thank you!
Have a great weekend.
XD
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Oh wow! Didn’t expect that! 🙂
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thank you for reading and hope you liked it x
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I did! 😊
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Always cheating spouses getting in the way. Easily, taken care of I guess. Hope she isn’t caught! Great story.
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thank you! i hope so too! hope you’re having a good week xx
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Lovely take Cherry with a beautiful metaphor to begin with before the brutal truth is revealed, one hopes for her sake no one notices him missing…..
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crossing my fingers for her too. thank you so much for reading and glad you like it
hope you’re having a good week xx
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Every week is a good one Cherry best wishes to you…
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that’s great(: love your mentality! thanks~
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Woah.. I din’t see that coming. I guess she’s had enough.
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yes thank you for reading and hope you’re having a good week xx
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You’re most welcome. Have a good weekend too! 😉
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Oh wow. Your timing in dropping the story’s facts and twists is just commendable. Great!
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thank you! you’re very kind. hope you’re having a great week xx
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Yes. 😀 A busy but great one! 😀 Hope you are, too!
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Oh, didn’t see that coming. Well done, drawing us in to the end.
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thank you sally(: glad you liked it and hope you’re having a good week xx
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Oooh great take on the prompt! Gave me good shivers 🙂
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i had some shivers while writing it too. thank you for reading and hope you’re having a good week xx
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Yikes. I was thinking suicide, but holy moly… What a twist. Enjoyed it!
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glad you liked it. thank you and hope you’re having a good week xx
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Brilliant and in so few words!
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thank you for your kind words(: glad you liked it and hope you’re having a good week xx
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Nicely done! I love the mix of light and dark. 🙂 I hope no one ever begins to suspect her.
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i hope so too! thank you and glad you liked it xx
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Oh, what a dark twist! It’s not all flowers and butterflies, more like corpses and skeletons! Loved reading your story 🙂
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glad you enjoyed it! thank you for reading and hope you’re having a great week!
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