NaPoWriMo, Poetry
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Lone strangers

Image credit: Viktor Kern

I lost you
on the coldest night
of winter,
that June night
when harsh words torn us apart
to be lone strangers


Written for Day 4 of NaPoWriMo

Thanks to Annie for introducing this lovely style of poetry – shadorma (a Spanish 6-line syllabic poem of 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllable lines) – and she has written a touching piece about choices here.


  1. How sad it is, when words can be so beautiful yet so sharp and painful. Lovely though sad poem, my dear, and thank you for the mention. 😘


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