NaPoWriMo, Poetry
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Lone strangers

Image credit: Viktor Kern

I lost you
on the coldest night
of winter,
that June night
when harsh words torn us apart
to be lone strangers


 

Written for Day 4 of NaPoWriMo

Thanks to Annie for introducing this lovely style of poetry – shadorma (a Spanish 6-line syllabic poem of 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllable lines) – and she has written a touching piece about choices here.

2 Comments

  1. How sad it is, when words can be so beautiful yet so sharp and painful. Lovely though sad poem, my dear, and thank you for the mention. 😘

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