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Watchful stars

Image credit: Lim Changwon

She rushed over to help with the berthing.

“How did it go?”

“I dropped him where the echo sounder didn’t give any reading.”

“Perfect. It should be very deep.”

She smiled. The stars would be their only witnesses of this traitorous act.


  1. Jennifer G. Knoblock says

    Not your ordinary careless criminals–the coldness of the dialogue and that smile, nicely done. I’m thinking spies…


  2. Christine says

    The dialogue gives us a great sense of the personalities, as does her smile at the end.


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