Photo-Fiction Challenge
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The crumbling facade



On the first page of our story
The future seemed so bright
Then this thing turned out so evil
I don’t know why I’m still surprised

– Rihanna “Love the way you lie Part II”

She looks happy they say; she looks well they say.

But they have forgotten about facades. And hers is flawless. Almost. The convincing has gotten a little tough, and she is, slowly, crumbling. The sweet nothings or his poison tongue; which should she believe?

A toxic relationship. An unhealthy one. Till now, it is love that has made her stay and fight for them, the once happy couple, but she cannot deny the ever-growing desire of freedom. She just wants to be happy.

Still, walking away is not that simple. Is it wrong to believe that someday he may change?


(100 words) Written in response to Photo-Fiction #14


  1. maynotbesoanonymous says

    You are a gifted writer. I can see it in every post you make. 🙂 Continue writing. Have a blessed week!


  2. Pingback: Photo-Fiction #14 | Random_Michelle

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